Debbie Bowie of Rock Scissors Paper sent me a video of her recent TV appearance and asked for my critique. The video is below. And my critique is below that. If you’d like your speech or media appearance critiqued, please send me a link to the video at tj@tjwalker.com

Strengths:

• Good energy
• Good movement
• Nice smile
• Great hand movements
• Easy to understand
• Excellent posture
• Look like you are having fun
• Knowledgeable
• Natural
• Conversational
• Solid information

Areas for improvement:

• Dangly earrings are distracting. Better to wear ones that sit on the ear.
• Skirt pattern was too complex and too distracting. Better to stick with a solid.
• Don’t lean on arm rest
• Need to come up with at least one idea or twist on an idea that seems original and memorable (that didn’t come through here)
• Offer viewers some free special report or test if they come to your website. You must give them a motivation.